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Monday, September 23, 2019

this is my persuasive writing hope you enjoy

 Toroa students are losing the war against .hats How frustrating is it when you are trying to run and you hat keeps falling off your head? Do you just want a new hat that actually stays on? do you want to keep wearing a bucket hat that is too big or too small for your head?

if we get marshland school caps the Toroa students will be more mature and put sunscreen on.And for student of Toroa their hat will not come of because the caps won't fly of off their heads and the straps are adjustable so it won’t give the student excuses to not where their hats.

 Toroa students like caps more because if you are walking outside of school and you see a Toroa student you will see them with a cap on in the summer and there is a 20% chance of you seeing them with a bucket hat on.

cap and are you sick and tired of telling students to stop turning their bucket hats into caps and if you by these caps you won't have the hassle of telling the students off it would be much easier for everyone. i think we should have Toroa caps so that the students will be encouraged to wear there hats in the summer.

If we get the caps the students will love term 1 and 4 more than they would have if we had the buckets hats and it will be a good term for the students and for the teachers. If you want to have a better term then you need to by caps.For the good of you and the Toroa students.We need to make a change! our Toroa students need there caps!
 

hope you liked it and that you are on my side of the argument please leave a comment and tell your friends to do the same.



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